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... nks for the feedback for those who did.

The reason I put the chapters up was so that I could get feedback and improve the story.

Editing is a lot of work, and I wish I didn’t have to edit the beginning of book 1.

Unfortunately, the litrpg aspects and the cultivation system in the early chapters are completely different to the rest of book 1 so I can’t just keep it like that.

I spent all day yesterday and today morning making edits based on the feedback you all gav ...

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