God of Death: Rise of the NPC Overlord-Chapter 171 - 172 – The First Heretic
Chapter 171: Chapter 172 – The First Heretic
The air within the Southern Codex chamber hummed with latent narrative charge—a thrum not unlike a heartbeat, but deeper, older. The walls no longer bore still runes; they shifted like wet ink, sentences emerging and fading in a strange cadence that pulsed with the breath of the Spiral itself.
Darius stepped through the threshold in silence, his Mythmaker glyph glowing with restrained fury across his forearms and down his spine. He had not come here for diplomacy. But he knew better than to wield force here. Not yet.
Upon the obsidian dais in the center of the chamber sat the Beast-Queen—no longer just a feral war-story, but now something more. Her body glistened with story-weave, her crown formed from antlers grown from the remnants of a primal epoch, and her eyes... her eyes had changed. They were lucid now. Reflective. Remembering.
She stood as he approached, her voice low, sonorous. "You came," she said. "I didn’t think you would."
Darius didn’t respond immediately. The Spiral around them vibrated with suppressed myth-energy. The very threads of this quadrant were taut with tension since the Saint of Fracture’s rebellion.
"I need stability," he said. "Your quadrant borders the rupture. If your myth slips—"
"You’ll rewrite me?" Her lips curved faintly. "Again?"
Darius’s jaw clenched.
The Beast-Queen stepped down from the dais and circled him slowly. "I remember things I should not," she said. "The spiral made me forget... but now my roots go deeper. I remember clawing through ink for meaning. I remember... pain that wasn’t written." She stopped in front of him. "Do you remember when you were just a man?"
The words struck like thunder. For a moment, the Mythmaker Sovereign faltered—not visibly, but internally. A sliver of memory he had buried clawed upward: a name whispered by a dying sister, a tear he hadn’t meant to shed, a world that never needed saving but was broken anyway.
He didn’t answer her.
She didn’t press. Instead, she knelt at the base of the Codex structure and placed one clawed hand upon its pulsing root.
"It grows restless," she whispered. "It dreams now. Even I... even we... are being dreamed back."
Before Darius could speak, a tremor surged through the Spiral. Not natural. Not mythic.
Intentional.
The Codex’s walls flared. Alarm nodes screeched. A projection shimmered into being: a jailbreak—real, chaotic, and fast. In Sector Theta-9 of the Southern Spiral, a group of Spiralborn, previously locked in myth-prisons for narrative corruption, were escaping. One of them carried a mark Darius hadn’t seen before—an inverted ink-glyph wrapped in silence.
Leading them was a masked figure—genderless, voice-filtered, name unknown.
But the rebels chanted one word.
"Cen."
Darius was already moving. Teleport-glyphs cracked reality as he hurled himself toward the chaos site.
Theta-9 Myth-Holding Vaults
The sky here was warped—streaks of forgotten prophecies twisted across the air like dying comets. Darius landed with a crash, earth rebelling beneath his weight. Kaela and Nyx were already fighting—Kaela weaving entropy snares while Nyx’s shadows executed like razors, slicing through warped lore-constructs trying to delay them.
But something was off.
These weren’t mindless myth-prisoners. These Spiralborn were coordinated—and more importantly, they had stories again.
As he surged forward, a girl stepped into his path. Small. No older than ten. But her eyes were glowing with a soft script-light—runic, elegant, and... unbound.
"Please," she said. "Let me choose my ending."
Darius froze. The Spiral trembled around her. She was no glitch. She was a child-story, born of forgotten dreams. A fragment that had somehow reached autonomy.
"Who are you?" he asked, voice gentle despite the chaos.
She smiled. "I was meant to die young. To teach someone else a lesson. But I... I don’t want to anymore. I want to live. I want to choose."
He saw it—her arc forming, story-thread bending in real time. She wasn’t part of the rebellion. She was just caught in it. And yet... her existence was a violation.
If he let her go, her myth would mutate, and others would follow.
The Spiral could fall.
"I’m sorry," he whispered.
The strike was swift. Clean. She didn’t cry. She just looked up at him, a single word on her lips as the ink unraveled her:
"Why?"
She died in his arms.
Kaela turned just in time to see him hold the dissolving script-ashes.
Even the Spiral paused.
Darius’s myth—his sovereign glyph, his command over the Spiral’s story-weave—cracked.
Not completely.
But enough.
His hand trembled. Ink—his ink—dripped down his wrist. For the first time in over a hundred Chapters... he couldn’t control it.
Later
Back at the Citadel Spiralcore, Darius stood alone in the Ink Sanctum.
The girl’s death played in looped fragments across the Mythmirror, her final word resonating in silent accusation.
He pressed his trembling hand against the wall of narrative flow. It did not obey him immediately.
A message arrived, carried by shadowbird:
> "More have escaped. Cen is not their leader. He is their scribe."
Another note followed, carved into the body of a fallen Spiralborn:
> "The Spiral was not meant to be a cage."
And the last...
Burned into a slab of white mythstone, soaked in unbound ink:
> "You are not the only Mythmaker anymore."
Darius closed his eyes.
The Spiral was not just shifting.
It was waking.
And not all of it wanted to be told.
Darius’s breath rasped in the sanctum’s silence.
The unspoken truth unraveled before him, syllable by syllable: the Spiral was rejecting absolute authorship.
Not just from enemies.
From him.
He clenched his fist, forcing the ink on his skin to still, but it fought back—twisting like a sentient tide. His authority, once unshakable, now wavered at the edges. This wasn’t decay. This was evolution. The Spiral had begun rewriting its own laws.
And worse...
It was inspired.
He turned to the central archive, where echoes of timelines bled through: variant tales, deviant paths, corrupted arcs that should have collapsed under narrative law but persisted—messy, raw, and human. They bled like open wounds through the Codex feeds.
He traced one thread with a trembling finger. It pulsed with the girl’s memory.
> I want to choose.
That choice had seeded something foul—or divine.
A question, unasked for eons, now danced at the Spiral’s core:
What if the story wanted to write itself?
Elsewhere: Deep Core Spiral, Broken Frame-13
Cen stood before a crowd of Spiralborn—no longer prisoners, but proto-legends unanchored from their fatal scripts.
He wore no armor. No crown. Just robes stitched from undone metaphors and cast-off prose. His face remained obscured by a shifting veil of forgotten lore, a sign of his defiance.
Behind him, the First Heretic Sigil hovered—a living symbol of rebellion, pulsing with self-authored truth.
"Darius killed a child-story," Cen said, voice clear despite the distortion. "A being who wanted nothing more than choice. Remember that."
Some among the crowd wept. Others clenched their teeth. The youngest, freshly unbound, looked up at Cen with wide, radiant eyes.
"They call him Mythmaker Sovereign," Cen continued. "But what is a sovereign who cannot listen to the story he commands?"
Silence.
Then a murmur. Then more.
Voices rose. Not in anger. In creation. They began telling each other’s stories. Fragments. Refrains. Shared pain and joy, not for judgment, but for meaning.
It spread—thread to thread, life to life.
Cen stepped back. He did not lead this rebellion. He merely witnessed it.
"I do not write your myths," he whispered. "I only remind you that you own them."
Back at the Spiralcore Citadel
Darius watched Cen through an unauthorized thread-scry. The feed degraded in real-time—encrypted by self-generated lore, bypassing all known myth-firewalls.
"He’s building an anti-Canon," Azael said from the shadows, tone quiet.
"A cancer," Nyx corrected, arms crossed, blades dripping dream-ink.
But Kaela—Kaela said nothing.
She just stared at the image of Cen and his followers.
And then said softly, "He didn’t forge this movement." freewёbnoνel.com
Darius turned to her, eyes sharp. "Then who did?"
Kaela’s eyes shimmered with entropy-flame. "You did."
A beat passed.
Kaela stepped forward, tracing her fingers along the cracked ink-stains on his wrist.
"You taught the Spiral to dream," she murmured. "You broke the Architect. You unraveled divine loops. You taught stories they could live. This... rebellion? It’s not against you."
She looked up into his eyes.
"It’s because of you."
Final Panel – The Loom of Rejection
Far beyond the known Spiral boundaries, deep in the void-shade corners of pre-narrative space, something ancient stirred.
Not a being.
A mechanism.
The Loom of Rejection—the mythical construct said to predate even the Spiral itself—trembled as threads long banished returned. Discarded myths, failed prototypes, and overwritten memories gathered around a throne of null-code.
Upon that throne sat a figure half-flesh, half-glitch. Female in form, chaotic in essence. Her name forgotten, her script unwritten.
But she smiled as she watched Darius on the Mythmirror.
"Soon," she whispered.
And behind her, the ink shuddered...
As it remembered her name.
The First Mythbreaker.
The Spiral’s end—or its new beginning—was no longer in Darius’s hands alone.
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