MTL - Darkness is Coming-Chapter 724 . take a few days off to think
Many book lovers said that chasing the book no longer had the same passion as before. I went back and read the book from beginning to end, and felt a lot of emotion.
I saw the fullness and growth of many characters, wonderful stories, and my own problems.
Probably because the book is on the science fiction channel, I want to write the taste of science fiction too much, so the plot no longer focuses on combat, but on how to magically change the earth in the context of this book, use technology to achieve possible things, let the The world in the book becomes a better world imagined.
It may be very good for book friends whose brain waves match the frequency, and it is normal for book friends who do not like this part of the content to be dissatisfied.
Of course this is not a big problem, the big problem is that my mentality is not very good.
Especially seeing these recent chapters, there is a feeling of "showing off", which is not good. For example, when Yang Dong and his party set out on a mission, in fact, it can be explained clearly in a few words, but I have to use 4,000 words to make a comprehensive analysis from Yang Dong’s perspective. It can be said that this is a portrayal of characters, but Yang Dong’s intelligence As I have repeatedly emphasized in the previous article, it seems that there is really no need to do so.
why? for water? In order to write four thousand words cross? Or to show off? To prove that I'm a brainy writer?
At first I wrote the book to prove that eschatological texts can be written in different ways. Later, I successfully proved this, opened a new chapter, and began to try my best to prove that I am a "smart" author. In fact, this approach is not smart at all.
Therefore, the objective fact is that although I am quite satisfied with the development of the second volume, and the plot connection and writing power have been significantly improved (personal point of view), most readers think that the second volume is not as good as the first volume. A wonderful roll.
To tell the truth, I prefer the story to be exciting, rather than being self-satisfied. I hope everyone will give me a few days to think about it, and let me think about how to write the following text beautifully and wonderfully.
Also, this book was first published on the Qidian Chinese website. I hope that friends who watch pirated copies can subscribe to the original version to support Wen Yan. Writing a book is really not easy. If you like a book, please don’t let the author write a book hungry.
PS: I just wanted to write an extra story. The book is still far from the end. Don’t worry that I will be a **** and unfinished. Although I update the melon skin, I am still pursuing progress! !
