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im wrtting a bl about fantasy, powered theme and comedic, i need opinions and people to read it and tell me what i can change or what they like/dis about it!!
heres a sumary , In pursuit of mastering a healing spell to aid his ailing mother, Iseul, a novice witch, inadvertently opens a portal to a realm of damnation instead. From this rift emerge three unexpected figures: Gwahadan, a fallen angel who perished on Earth; Munjin, the soul collector for the legend of below himself; and Yisimia, a creation from munjin’s wings. Amidst these central characters are others integral to the unfolding narrative: Munjin's resentful younger sister, a ex named Kihoon, a formidable tale of reunion and rejuvenation with mothers, and a host of angels and spirits. Munjin strikes a pact with Iseul to temporarily harness his powers for Earthly cover, unaware that their actions will provoke aboved beings—angels and seraphim—to destabilize the balance the planet's existence. Now, the group must embark on a quest to unearth a source—a gem, a scroll, or other enigmatic artifacts—to unlock Iseul's latent powers in time to save Earth from impending doom. Amidst these trials, they must navigate the intricate dynamics of their own rivalry and camaraderie, balancing affection with conflict as they confront both old adversaries and newfound allies.
im wrtting a bl about fantasy, powered theme and comedic, i need opinions and people to read it and tell me what i can change or what they like/dis about it!!
heres a sumary , In pursuit of mastering a healing spell to aid his ailing mother, Iseul, a novice witch, inadvertently opens a portal to a realm of damnation instead. From this rift emerge three unexpected figures: Gwahadan, a fallen angel who perished on Earth; Munjin, the soul collector for the legend of below himself; and Yisimia, a creation from munjin’s wings. Amidst these central characters are others integral to the unfolding narrative: Munjin's resentful younger sister, a ex named Kihoon, a formidable tale of reunion and rejuvenation with mothers, and a host of angels and spirits. Munjin strikes a pact with Iseul to temporarily harness his powers for Earthly cover, unaware that their actions will provoke aboved beings—angels and seraphim—to destabilize the balance the planet's existence. Now, the group must embark on a quest to unearth a source—a gem, a scroll, or other enigmatic artifacts—to unlock Iseul's latent powers in time to save Earth from impending doom. Amidst these trials, they must navigate the intricate dynamics of their own rivalry and camaraderie, balancing affection with conflict as they confront both old adversaries and newfound allies.
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