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Member1 day ago
Rocks!
I have no complaints about the writing and writing style, and the and pacing is steady. The characters were consistent, and the storyline flows and makes sense.
I also really liked how the idea of fated mates here is slightly different than the usual (at least the others I have read.)
I also really liked how the idea of fated mates here is slightly different than the usual (at least the others I have read.)

Member4 days ago
Rocks!
Speechless
Sucks big time
Chapter 1: "Instance Name: Blo*** Restaurant"
"Instance Type: Novice Trial"
"Instance Player Count: Solo"
"Objective: Survive 72 hours"
72 HOURS. And yet, well over 80 chapters and 3 in story days later the MC still hasn't cleared the novice he** difficulty instance mission and still seems to be planning for an unknown extended days to survive like the author completely forgot that this arc was supposed to be a timed survival mission instead of an investigation quest line story arc as the author pours more and more world building into the Blo*** Restaurant world. Like the extended world building of a reincarnation story meets a half-baked mentality of a quick transmigrator's belief in the strength of their system. And of course the system basically never pops up again except tangentially as status prompts or iffy item descriptions. And judging by the chapter names, the MC still hasn't left the Blo*** Restaurant Arc even after over a 1000 chapters
The cover/title are a lie/misleading since the MC becomes a delivery guy instead of a butcher like the cover smock implies and basically lost his human form day 1, got turned into a regen tentacle arms monster
TL;DR: It's like the frustration of starting a fantasy anime with the summary being watch the journey of the greatest Archmage and the first episode being the MC stating that Magic School is starting soon and that the MC should hurry to make the journey in time for the "short deadline". Then season 1 ends with the MC still on the road after x amount of side quests and only occasionally still thinking about how far the MC still has to go to get to the school while completely ignoring the deadline setting from episode 1
"Instance Type: Novice Trial"
"Instance Player Count: Solo"
"Objective: Survive 72 hours"
72 HOURS. And yet, well over 80 chapters and 3 in story days later the MC still hasn't cleared the novice he** difficulty instance mission and still seems to be planning for an unknown extended days to survive like the author completely forgot that this arc was supposed to be a timed survival mission instead of an investigation quest line story arc as the author pours more and more world building into the Blo*** Restaurant world. Like the extended world building of a reincarnation story meets a half-baked mentality of a quick transmigrator's belief in the strength of their system. And of course the system basically never pops up again except tangentially as status prompts or iffy item descriptions. And judging by the chapter names, the MC still hasn't left the Blo*** Restaurant Arc even after over a 1000 chapters
The cover/title are a lie/misleading since the MC becomes a delivery guy instead of a butcher like the cover smock implies and basically lost his human form day 1, got turned into a regen tentacle arms monster
TL;DR: It's like the frustration of starting a fantasy anime with the summary being watch the journey of the greatest Archmage and the first episode being the MC stating that Magic School is starting soon and that the MC should hurry to make the journey in time for the "short deadline". Then season 1 ends with the MC still on the road after x amount of side quests and only occasionally still thinking about how far the MC still has to go to get to the school while completely ignoring the deadline setting from episode 1
Meh
Sem nexo nenhum
Do nada um torneio
Do nada a irmã do prota aparece no torneio e já conhecendo uma doida que ele falou 2x no jogo e já chama de cunhada
Do nada um torneio
Do nada a irmã do prota aparece no torneio e já conhecendo uma doida que ele falou 2x no jogo e já chama de cunhada
Member9 days ago
Rocks!
Honestly, one of the best story oat, book and ebook coufound

Member13 days ago
Rocks!
re-reading this novel because its peak literature
Rocks!
I never got tired of re-reading this 


Member15 days ago
Rocks!
ᴛʜɪs ɪs sᴏ ᴀʙsᴏʟᴜᴛᴇ ɢᴏᴏᴅ!! 100/100 💅
Meh
Not bad but not good
Rocks!
Pretty good so far, I like the world building and the physics incorporated magic ideas also recovering memories is pretty cool, a lot of other things to but I don't want to say spoilers

Member16 days ago
Meh
Storyline really had potential. Unfortunately the lack of properly developed characters and story and super rushed pacing took away from a relatively unique concept.
So far it's like an omegaverse x wolf pack Romeo and Juliet story, with more drama and some pretty evil characters.
I'm not dropping it because I really want to know what happens.
So far it's like an omegaverse x wolf pack Romeo and Juliet story, with more drama and some pretty evil characters.
I'm not dropping it because I really want to know what happens.
Rocks!
I love this whole adventure. There are not many like this😍😍😍 definitely one of my favorites
Member17 days ago
Rocks!
I have some questions regarding this scene from your story:
"Tears streamed down his snout like waterfalls. "Brother! Oh, my poor brother! You died so miserably!"
1. When Leonidas cried, did his tears stream all the way to the end of his snout and onto the tip of his nose?
2. Exactly how would Leonidas react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears streaming down his snout with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Leonidas' snout.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Leonidas' tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his snout?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears streaming down Leonidas' snout?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
"Tears streamed down his snout like waterfalls. "Brother! Oh, my poor brother! You died so miserably!"
1. When Leonidas cried, did his tears stream all the way to the end of his snout and onto the tip of his nose?
2. Exactly how would Leonidas react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears streaming down his snout with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Leonidas' snout.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Leonidas' tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his snout?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears streaming down Leonidas' snout?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
Pretty good
It's good, something easy to read, cute couple
Rocks!
Why is messi riding a pole ki** a stripper!?!?!

Member20 days ago
Rocks!
Thank you so much for your had work, please keep updating it.


Rocks!
So far it's really good. I like that it's moving at a good pace too
Member25 days ago
Rocks!
Good subject, pacing, and story, but first of all, just check the tags, and if you’re into it, you’ll enjoy it.
Member26 days ago
Sucks big time
Tried, but the author constantly talking about how intelligent the MC is while taking thoughtless actions is just to much.

Member26 days ago
Rocks!
VERY WELL WRITTEN! Divinely smutty and funny as well. Read all 260 chapters in one binge. I just couldn't put it down.




