JohnDoe's review on Manga: Real And Fake Young Lady: I Have Seven Brothers Pampering Me After I Transmigrated (3/5)

Not the worst ever, but I kinda disliked it due to how dumb the plot got at times. The starting school ark is ok-ish, but then as it got to big business schemes arks, the author who is trying to write a 200 IQ MC, just lacked brains to write one convincingly. (Spoiler warning) For example, goes on a meeting with minor competitors for no good reason, flexes / faceslaps / scares&blackmails them. Problem: meeting them achieved nothing useful, exposed MCs identity and abilities prematurely, blackmail backfires they alert a higher Boss level antagonist. This leads to huge problems to MC only eventually getting solved deus ex machina style by mysteriously gaining clairvoyant powers (not explained how or why), preventing a tragedy and thus befriending the Mayor, gaining huge loans and other help. Thats catastrophic fuckup by MC that then resolved by magic elements, kind of shi*** writing. Not saying mistakes by MC mean automatically bad story, if it is properly written, maybe an inexperienced MC who grows by recognizing and learning from these mistakes, this can be good. But the author is going the reincarnated 200 iq genius MC route, mistakes are not recognized as stupid, retarded stuff is written as smart. Another example: MC luckily survives two encounters with dangerous antagonist, who would have helped others abduct, assault, ra**, torture and potentially kill her. He is described as Chaotic Evil bas**** who will do anything to anyone for money. After he is subdued with brother's help he is ... recruited as a trusted (?!) bodyguard (wtf?!) of MC and magically becomes loyal(?). Ahem, in a well written novel about smart MC, yeah, maybe an evil enemy can be subdued and used, with a lot of precautions against betrayal, but written like this, it is just retarded af.