Anone's review on Manga: Urban Plundering: I Corrupted The System! (2/5)
Anone
Member11 months ago
Kinda bad
TL;DR - The Author is over decriptive and leaves you hanging at key points for no gods damned reason.
I've read until chapter C.379 so far, and frankly I'm losing my patience for this author. His story is well crafted, but his chapters are short, and are main just long, extended descriptions of things. For like 100 chapters the Author set up this first meeting between the MC and his childhood oprressors, and then when he gets to it, he takes 20 chapters to go through maybe the first 10 minutes of the meeting, taking his time describing everything... then suddenly at the end of the chapter, just as the people who were his bullies are called to centerstage, the Author ends the chapter and the next chapter moves time forward by a week! No pay off for the tension he built, no long detailed descriptions of how he was going to let the MC get his revenge. Nope, their names are called, then Chapter ends and in the 14 chapters since then he hasn't even mentioned the MC AT ALL!! 14 chapters that mainly focus on introducing all new charaters we've never met before, meanwhile everyone is left hanging as what happened with this "super important" meet up that had been being set up for half the fuc**** story, that was skipped over, literally, with a time jump of a week! The middle of an arc's climax, and he just skips it! Fu** you Author, just fu** you!
I've read until chapter C.379 so far, and frankly I'm losing my patience for this author. His story is well crafted, but his chapters are short, and are main just long, extended descriptions of things. For like 100 chapters the Author set up this first meeting between the MC and his childhood oprressors, and then when he gets to it, he takes 20 chapters to go through maybe the first 10 minutes of the meeting, taking his time describing everything... then suddenly at the end of the chapter, just as the people who were his bullies are called to centerstage, the Author ends the chapter and the next chapter moves time forward by a week! No pay off for the tension he built, no long detailed descriptions of how he was going to let the MC get his revenge. Nope, their names are called, then Chapter ends and in the 14 chapters since then he hasn't even mentioned the MC AT ALL!! 14 chapters that mainly focus on introducing all new charaters we've never met before, meanwhile everyone is left hanging as what happened with this "super important" meet up that had been being set up for half the fuc**** story, that was skipped over, literally, with a time jump of a week! The middle of an arc's climax, and he just skips it! Fu** you Author, just fu** you!