keebbles's review on Manga: THE ZOMBIE SYSTEM (2/5)

Disjointed chapters.  Order is odd. Large unsupported changes in location of story as if dozens of chapters were skipped. 
Result, unreadable. 
Premis is worthy.
Lacks execution. 
Unsure if it's from being stolen from source without review, or author's/editor's sc*** up. 
Negative stars.