Doufu's review on Manga: [BL] Dear Hushand, I want divorce (3/5)

My 3-star rating is for the writing style  (grammar and verbiage,) which is quite GOOD. The plot development was a bit rushed, but the reason for the loss of stars is because the characters are inconsistent and honestly all over the place. Both Ash and Elijah's characters lack depth and are not very well developed, or maybe it's that they all act so immaturely it's beyond frustrating. 
Ash periodically clings onto Elijah, while asking why he's being so nice to him suddenly. The minute Elijah confesses his love, Ash suddenly starts cussing and throwing tantrums that the confession is a lie. On the upside, because the writing is good so is the sm**. 😉 
I look forward to future works by this writer and hope that their character and story development will continue to improve.