
Joshua Calderon
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logic thrown at the window.Do mantis lay eggs?
his famous and strong lets talk sh** about him in his face.
ohh he is so handome even though he is wearing a mask.
ohh I can see half of his face even though he is wearing a mask.
Sucks big time
Sucks big time
Sucks big time
troll novelSucks big time
lolol lololol lolllolol lolololololKinda bad
meh it started good but somehow it keeps getting annoying of how much ILLOGICAL the antoganist can be. like he just killed one girl(just above average girl not perfect) and the whole world is after him... wtf what did he kill just a random mob. And it started by the demoness to feeding him a two way poison for no reason and everyone decided to bully him. overall it`s good but the progression stop when it repeatedly keep the same scenario all over again yes he grows stronger but did he improve the story no just another cycle again with absurd amount of unknown reason of hatred for the mc. so MEHHHH I`ll drop it at 271.
OOOHHH SO AMAZING(fake smile) you guys gotta believe me this is good(eye twitching) and you would be in the losing end if you skip this.
just sucks what do you expect
this novel reminds me one novel that rich people made a tv show of of being alone in the world to humiliate one poor dude who doesn`t even know them but gained a system and became a genius and built a spaceship then left the earth to die.... the end( I don`t know the tittle but it was a whacking illogical chinese novel portraying chinese number one attitude). overall the author made this for dumb and moronic people to read to make himself look like a qenius.i got nothing to read so I started reading this and theres one thing I have to say... if your reading thi novel you have to shut down your brain to enjoy tthis. cause system gambling(choosing your race by random, making you choose random places... dude the novel promotes gambling), unfair game advantages that somehow gambling and mostly luck base element are key elements now if your making novels, logic being thrown to the side to beautify some part and MC made to be cool and serious type the momment you are in fantasy troupe... dude
. overall just kill your brain if your reading this.
. overall just kill your brain if your reading this.this novel got me hook 1-629 chapters and along the way the is hypocrisy in the protagonist but can be tolerated as tag like naive,indecisive and etc protagonist are shown. Characters flesh out and constant but MC character is suppose to be serious and straightforward person that hates to sheme and decisive to sometimes becoming indecisive and shememing son of B character.Overall I got bored and I just went 629 to ending.
well it started good with a simple and clear background story and plot but as we go futher the background story get twisited (Summarry: gained a system based on a game and all the disasters along with it from the game to the reality from his regress life but at chapter 308 they changed it to him gaining a system but with a regress life where they where inviaded by aliens[He somehow survive all the disaster and apocalypse] and he want to change it all.) Plus somehow the story get patriotic and passive racist as we go on and also the author made it seem that other people beside MC have below level intellegence, slow reaction and understanding of their suroundings. Like WTF Cuntries getting suppress with military force? Wtf even if its a big country bullying a small nation they will get punish BUT Sunset Counrty bullying multiply country that has possible of having nukes is possible(nonsence). But President of Dragon country being showed all the device all invention that could woped their a** in any moment( still ZERO danger awareness like there is no 1000 robot he seen perform super soldier sh** going to kick his a**) orders his men to attack MC... either this people is to Dumb or they are seeing is believing type and they keep noding theyre heads as they listen to MC explainging one by one of his invention but not understanding it ( it is like me when I go to my hated class subject).
Sucks big time
i did read it but it made my day worse and that is only reading up to 20. too much wishy washy, wrong logic and calculation and the plot is like "here you go and I won`t explain you gotta read more chapters for you to understand" and characters that are introduce is like full of contradiction of what the author shows.
it was good in the first few chapters but when I hit 40 chapters I question how come the novel rarely uses the system and every time the system appears once in 100 or so chapter. and when I reach chapters 350 plus the story deviated and convoluted that I just lost it and just speed read it or skip every long sentences I come across. and the finale, just felt like it was done half heartedly. then theres character progression... trash progression. I give tthis a 2/5
Sucks big time
Sucks big time
Sucks big time
Sucks big time
less IDLE more working the hardway not the smart way
Sucks big time
Sucks big time
suck big time
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