Bernielives's Reviews

Spends 350 chapters creating a little family of MC and his 4 disciples to just throw them all away so MC can go to next relm before he's even at the appropriate level. The author gives some bs fate and karma explanation that mc can see them succeeding in the future so its okay to ditch his didciples. I was really enjoying story till then,, just frustrates me thinking he'll now get all new disciples that will become part of his group till he ditches them again.. I dropped it.

Sucks big time

Story is kinda interesting but the whole system shop thing was starting to eat into my brain. He gets a system shop and it's cost to open is equal to the cost of his current evolution, which doubles every evolution. So he's like I better open this up soon... nope just keeps evolving himself thus increasing the cost of the shop. Which seems to never be mentioned again?  But every time he evolves it shows his stats and the bottom is system shop - unopened. My eyes were starting to twitch every time I read it.

General story is fine, read up to 250, but ml is garbage character. Just runs around getting non stop free upgrades and treating everyone like sh**. Refuses to tell anyone anything so he can literally get into the same fights over and over.  And how does every family he go to have 1 person who just starts random sh** with him. He gave the high level zombies personalities so he could just treat them like robots still and not engage with them at all. Just not good.

Sucks big time

Made it about 300 chapters. The inconsistencies in this novel are super bad. It starts out decent but slowly get very frustrating. From the Mc choices to his interaction with other character. Especially any romance... it's bad. You can tell the author is trying to force everything in the story with very bad reasoning and stupid Mc choices. I found it was more enjoyable to read the translators notes at the end of chapters. Whoever wrote those is pretty funny at times. Pointing out every weird thing in each chapter.

Up to ch 430. I enjoy the story so far but I'm getting a little fed up with the authors writing. I won't lie the r18 tag is one reason I read this novel.. I like some sauce with my meal. But it's become obvious the author has wrote the lead as gay. Every moment a scene gets heated he makes up something and runs away. He has what he describes as the two most beautiful women going down on him and he's like "begone b1tches". His se** neighbor is throwing herself at him but it's apparently never the right time. The story is written like it should be a r18 harem novel. it gets graphic at times but then the author blue ba*** the readers over and over. Then he makes the lead so proud that he can turn down all these women. I don't need that stuff in a novel. The stories not bad but stop with the teasing.

Sucks big time