Doufu's Reviews

I have no complaints about the writing and writing style, and the and pacing is steady. The characters were consistent, and the storyline flows and makes sense. 
I also really liked how the idea of fated mates here is slightly different than the usual (at least the others I have read.)

Storyline really had potential. Unfortunately the lack of properly developed characters and story and super rushed pacing took away from a relatively unique concept. 
So far it's like an omegaverse x wolf pack Romeo and Juliet story, with more drama and some pretty evil characters. 
I'm not dropping it because I really want to know what happens.

This isn't completed yet. But I'm enjoying the writing and development, and the characters are consistent.

My 3-star rating is for the writing style  (grammar and verbiage,) which is quite GOOD. The plot development was a bit rushed, but the reason for the loss of stars is because the characters are inconsistent and honestly all over the place. Both Ash and Elijah's characters lack depth and are not very well developed, or maybe it's that they all act so immaturely it's beyond frustrating. 
Ash periodically clings onto Elijah, while asking why he's being so nice to him suddenly. The minute Elijah confesses his love, Ash suddenly starts cussing and throwing tantrums that the confession is a lie. On the upside, because the writing is good so is the sm**. 😉 
I look forward to future works by this writer and hope that their character and story development will continue to improve.

Rocks

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and development. If you speak Chinese the translation will make sense; if you don't it might seem a bit awkward but understandable.

Rocks