keebbles's Reviews

First problem is POV and Voice.  
Omniscient active tense is beyond weird. 
It's narrating everything as it happens.

Story better served in first person or third. 

Second explaining everything twice or more. But then changing on the fly as if author didn't remember what they just said. 

Third call MC  to test by name. After results judge asks him his name. Not after others which might distract judge, but first. 
Fourth there's no hook other than a mcguffin gold pill MC uses. 
No mention of actual parent's power, bloodlines,  or their levels and what MC inherited or his potential.  

If a first novel, editor probably had to drink to handle all the unnecessary wording.  

If pov was chosen to stand out, it failed. There's a reason for standards.

Disjointed chapters.  Order is odd. Large unsupported changes in location of story as if dozens of chapters were skipped. 
Result, unreadable. 
Premis is worthy.
Lacks execution. 
Unsure if it's from being stolen from source without review, or author's/editor's sc*** up. 
Negative stars.

From chapter 122-123 and beyond this novel is dead as all further chapters are repeats of previous chapters. 
Author even noted problem with his uploads. 
Mass copying of novel doesn't see this from source used. 
Until fixed this is a dead novel. Not worth investing into.